Hi Mary,
This is for you:
“A friend of mine says that the first draft is the downdraft--you just get it down.  The second draft is the up draft--you fix it up.  You try to say what you have to say more accurately.  And the third draft is the dental draft, where you check every tooth, to see if it’s loose or cramped or decayed, or even, God help us, healthy.” (p. 26, Bird by Bird, Anne Lamott)